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Ty Lee Week 2011- Flirt

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I was extremely excited when I finished this, but at the moment I can barely keep my eyes open. But I'm still pleased with the way it turned out. My picture of Sokka and Hawky [link] was fine, but this is a marked improvement. I like the thinner lines, and I added highlights to their skin and clothes.

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The piece is beautiful, but the faces are both a little bit off. Ty Lee's eyes are too narrow, though I suppose she could be looking more sly than she usually does. Also, they look a little crooked. Her braid doesn't look very braid-like, more like a weirdly kinky ponytail, but I guess it looks like that in-show. I think her and Sokka's hands should be a little bigger. I've never actually written a critique before, so I'm maybe I'm saying all the wrong things and none of this is constructive, because really it's just nitpicking. But let me just say that overall this is lovely <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> GO TY LOKKA. It should have happened. (sobs) Ty Lee and Sokka both deserve better than Azula xD